Post by Planck Horseshoe on Jun 12, 2017 3:50:19 GMT
I did the corrections you pointed, I think this time it's alright.
-General Stuff-
Name: Plank Horseshoe
Nickname/Alias(es): Ponerd, Poneinstein, Ponwierd
Race: Earthpony
Gender: Male
Age: Teenager
Additional Status:
-Physical Stuff-
Pelt Color: Gray
Mane/Tail Color and Style:Dark Green, “spiked”.
Eye Color:Olive Green
Cutie Mark:3 gears
Other Scars/Markings:Acid burnts in the two front legs and a dot in the right side of the face.
Physique:Skinny
-Social Stuff-
Current Residence: Needs to define
Job:Craft and sell horseshoes, armors and other metal stuff. Repair too.
Mother:he haven’t met
Father:Isaac Horseshoe
Sibling(s): none
Other Family: none
Closest Friends: none
Courting/Courted By: none
Mate:none
Foal(s):none
-Personality Stuff-
Likes:Science in general, metallurgy, materials science and technology, gadgets, nerd stuff like games and superheroes. Fan of good coffee, chocolate, olives and gems. Like to target shoot with gadgets. Fan of classical music, rock and folk.
Dislikes: Fashion: he never felt interest in the way people dresses and sometimes associate this to people that discriminated him, so is something he is not in. TV: You can’t choose what you want to see, and always he turn on the TV, nothing interesting is going on. Internet is better! Seafood dishes, specially shrimps, many times made him feel nauseous. Rude people, words can hurt too and show what’s inside someone’s heart. It makes him feel very uncomfortable. Pop music: repetitive and shallow, done for making money, not to be beautiful or artistic!
Motivation:He wants to be a great engineer, and with his crafts make ponyville always a safe(and funny) place. He also wants to explore the world.
Strengths:Can craft gadgets, metal objects, learn fast and have good accuracy.
Weaknesses/Flaws:physically weak(just strong enough to use his craft tools), can’t use magic or spells, when emotional altered can’t do things efficiently, difficult in relationships.
Fears: Big rude guys makes him very uncomfortable and wanting to go away, maybe because of his past experiences with bullying. He is afraid of contracting some kinds of diseases or damage, it makes him in some occasions being detailer and careful, sometimes with annoying thinks in his head fearing that have contracted a disease, ingested poison and other things. He is afraid of being robbed, because he was sometimes, and he cares about his belongs. Also he is ingenuous, so is easy to cheat him. Big insects and strange creatures, fearing diseases that can be contracted or violent reactions.
Overall Persona: He has great interest in science, and like try to create and build things. Like to do crazy experiments including burn and explode things. A little materialist, but recognize that people are more important than things. Cause of his excentric/weird personality it’s difficult to him do friendship. He tries, but is difficult to a relationship become a true friendship. Many times he got depressed and feel lonely, and get very anxious when things are not working. With other ponys he like to do silly jokes and sometimes behave strange. Also sometimes hurt someone without pretending or recognizing. If life gets repetitive, he get bored and blue, feeling like a machine. Almost adult, but feel in part like a kid, and in some occasions behave like one. Not used to sports, but likes to do physical activities at least once a week. He plans to get money selling horseshoes and with his metallurgical services and pay a engineering college to have a big and relevant business to ponyville. He likes to help poor poneys when they really wanted to be helped and want to develop poor places. He is ingenuous, so people often cheat on him when he try to help. He loves to teach his knowledge to other ponys. When he wants to have a break, he won’t be satisfied with low quality chocolates and coffee, he very exigent with they. Have no much patience and talent to take care of kids, depending on their personality and education they can be very annoying to him. Although is difficult doing friends, he really want to do friends.
History/Background: His father, Isaac Horseshoe, had an business working with metallurgy and selling horseshoes. He teach his business to Planck, that after his death assumed it. Cause of his nerd kind, he suffered bullying at school, but nothing so heavy. His real problem was the loneliness. He interacted with people, but made very few friends. Planck now seek for money to do a college and make friends. He studied a lot of mettalurgy and materials science, going deeper than his father’s knowledge. He can’t use magic, so he needs knowledge to meet his goals.
-General Stuff-
Name: Plank Horseshoe
Nickname/Alias(es): Ponerd, Poneinstein, Ponwierd
Race: Earthpony
Gender: Male
Age: Teenager
Additional Status:
-Physical Stuff-
Pelt Color: Gray
Mane/Tail Color and Style:Dark Green, “spiked”.
Eye Color:Olive Green
Cutie Mark:3 gears
Other Scars/Markings:Acid burnts in the two front legs and a dot in the right side of the face.
Physique:Skinny
-Social Stuff-
Current Residence: Needs to define
Job:Craft and sell horseshoes, armors and other metal stuff. Repair too.
Mother:he haven’t met
Father:Isaac Horseshoe
Sibling(s): none
Other Family: none
Closest Friends: none
Courting/Courted By: none
Mate:none
Foal(s):none
-Personality Stuff-
Likes:Science in general, metallurgy, materials science and technology, gadgets, nerd stuff like games and superheroes. Fan of good coffee, chocolate, olives and gems. Like to target shoot with gadgets. Fan of classical music, rock and folk.
Dislikes: Fashion: he never felt interest in the way people dresses and sometimes associate this to people that discriminated him, so is something he is not in. TV: You can’t choose what you want to see, and always he turn on the TV, nothing interesting is going on. Internet is better! Seafood dishes, specially shrimps, many times made him feel nauseous. Rude people, words can hurt too and show what’s inside someone’s heart. It makes him feel very uncomfortable. Pop music: repetitive and shallow, done for making money, not to be beautiful or artistic!
Motivation:He wants to be a great engineer, and with his crafts make ponyville always a safe(and funny) place. He also wants to explore the world.
Strengths:Can craft gadgets, metal objects, learn fast and have good accuracy.
Weaknesses/Flaws:physically weak(just strong enough to use his craft tools), can’t use magic or spells, when emotional altered can’t do things efficiently, difficult in relationships.
Fears: Big rude guys makes him very uncomfortable and wanting to go away, maybe because of his past experiences with bullying. He is afraid of contracting some kinds of diseases or damage, it makes him in some occasions being detailer and careful, sometimes with annoying thinks in his head fearing that have contracted a disease, ingested poison and other things. He is afraid of being robbed, because he was sometimes, and he cares about his belongs. Also he is ingenuous, so is easy to cheat him. Big insects and strange creatures, fearing diseases that can be contracted or violent reactions.
Overall Persona: He has great interest in science, and like try to create and build things. Like to do crazy experiments including burn and explode things. A little materialist, but recognize that people are more important than things. Cause of his excentric/weird personality it’s difficult to him do friendship. He tries, but is difficult to a relationship become a true friendship. Many times he got depressed and feel lonely, and get very anxious when things are not working. With other ponys he like to do silly jokes and sometimes behave strange. Also sometimes hurt someone without pretending or recognizing. If life gets repetitive, he get bored and blue, feeling like a machine. Almost adult, but feel in part like a kid, and in some occasions behave like one. Not used to sports, but likes to do physical activities at least once a week. He plans to get money selling horseshoes and with his metallurgical services and pay a engineering college to have a big and relevant business to ponyville. He likes to help poor poneys when they really wanted to be helped and want to develop poor places. He is ingenuous, so people often cheat on him when he try to help. He loves to teach his knowledge to other ponys. When he wants to have a break, he won’t be satisfied with low quality chocolates and coffee, he very exigent with they. Have no much patience and talent to take care of kids, depending on their personality and education they can be very annoying to him. Although is difficult doing friends, he really want to do friends.
History/Background: His father, Isaac Horseshoe, had an business working with metallurgy and selling horseshoes. He teach his business to Planck, that after his death assumed it. Cause of his nerd kind, he suffered bullying at school, but nothing so heavy. His real problem was the loneliness. He interacted with people, but made very few friends. Planck now seek for money to do a college and make friends. He studied a lot of mettalurgy and materials science, going deeper than his father’s knowledge. He can’t use magic, so he needs knowledge to meet his goals.