Mistletoe

[Mistletoe]

(srry if this is dark but I did base it a bit off a kids movie character)

-General Stuff-

Name: Mistletoe Meadow(though she is named for its scientific reason not holiday reason)
Nickname/Alias(es): Missy, Doctor Meadow, Mistletoe
Race: Unicorn
Gender: Female
Age: Young Adult
Additional Status: Wears lab coat when she's at work, besides that shes not very interested in fashion. Though she has purchased a dress just in case someone would like to go out with her, teehee. She owns a homing pigeon to send messages for her, since does not enjoy talking face to face most of the time. Well known for her father who was a very intelligent scientist but also dangerous. Wears glasses becuase...shes blind :T.

-Physical Stuff- 


Pelt Color: a soft yellow kinda creamish
Mane/Tail Color and Style: her mane and tail are black with a pink streak. Her tail is left out messily and her mane is tied in a messy ponytail. She doesn't do her mane often since she doesn't take breaks often.
Eye Color: light blue
Cutie Mark: Her cutie mark is a blue atom 
Other Scars/Markings: none
Physique: Mistletoe is average height and pretty thin, she mostly just eats noodles since she doesn't have time to home cook meals three times a day. 

-Social Stuff-

Current Residence: Canterlot but she moves around a lot for work
Job: Experimental Scientist 
Mother: Marigold Bloom(passed)
Father: Fossil Fury(MIA)
Sibling(s): Warm Daisy(passed)
Other Family: Bellis Perennis 
Closest Friends: None currently, very lonely 
Courting/Courted By: Nopony she's too busy
Mate: Nopony
Foal(s): none

-Personality Stuff-

Likes: Since Mistletoe stays home a lot there not a lot of normal and fun things she likes to do. Mistletoe actually enjoys work, shes addicted to it and can go days without going outside just experimenting. She likes drawing when she has the time, though if she's drawing usually drawing something that has to do with her experiment, she's just obbessed with her work. One actual normal thing she likes doing is reading mystery novels, she likes the rush it gives her when she gets to the climax. Mistletoe loves finding the answers to problems, finding a cure or solution just feels so successful. Birds, she admires the way they fly and how no one taught them how to make a nest but they are born with instinct. 
Dislikes: Mistletoe does not like social interaction, she stutters a lot, its especially worse when talking to stuck up ponies in Canterlot. Mistletoe dislikes furry animals, she considers them work distractions. She doesn't like pausing on her work, especially when she's about to reach a breaking point. Fillies, she thinks their too loud, she only allows Bellis to stay with her because she's a well behaved helpful filly.
Motivation: Mistletoe wants to help solve world problems and discover new things. She also wants to clear her family name. 
Strengths: Mistletoe is good with perseverance. Good secret keeper, she can hold her tongue for a while. 
Weaknesses/Flaws: Her perseverance can make her very stubborn, not knowing when she needs to give up.
Fears: Mistletoe is afraid of going mad like her father. A bit afraid of getting hurt by one of hr own experiments. 
Overall Persona: 
Mistletoe has a very strange personality. Most ponies knows her for being a hermit, staying in her home(her father's lab) 247. She's loves to work and barely leaves the lab, only to get more noodles or stuff for her experiments. She's nervous around others, stuttering whole a lot. However she can also be a bit brash and defensive if someone doubts her work or intelligence. Mistletoe is very smart, though she is not up stuck and doesn't brag about her intelligence, rather seems to hide it by staying inside. Mistletoe doesn't admit but she is a bit lonely, having no one to talk to her but her niece. She would like to strike up an conversation , but is worried she will only be judged and asked questions because of her past. Mistletoe does reveal more of her soft side when around her niece, she does play with her sometimes. Mistletoe is also very mysterious, no one knows what she's cooking up in her lab and why she stays in there hours at a time. Many ponies are worried she could be brewing up something terrible like her father and that she will become mad. For the most part though Mistletoe is just an anti social pony and is just too busy working on medical cures and new creations to come out and mingle, she believes it is a waste of time. It is possible that she could go mad though if someone doesn't take the time to try and get to know her and understand her. 
History/Background:
Fossil and Marigold met as foals, they were married later and Fossil went into scientific research once Marigold fell ill, so he could find a cure. Marigold gave birth to two fillies, one was healthy and the other did not look so well. Mistletoe was named after one of the ingredients Fossil tried to use to cure Marigold and Daisy(her other sister). Her mother and sister were temporarily cured. Mistletoe grew interested in science and spent a lot of time with her father. Mistletoe got her cutiemark at school when she won with her science project. Her sister was later married and gave birth, but sadly things didn't goes well for her and their mother. so, Mistletoe took on helping Daisy's husband,Onyx,raise their foal since he had to work alot to help support his family as well as himself, they named the foal, Bellis Perennies after her sister's name Daisy. After that her father shut her out. He spent all day in his lab, experimenting. He went mad and tried to become powerful so he could use it for his own selish wants. But once people found out, Fossil went missing, probably into hiding. 

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[Ashti Sandburst]

Hm... must say, it's rather dark on some points. It doesn't bother me per se, but regarding the site's mood. Hm... something I can propose you is to soften or being vague on some point, like her father that went to resurrect dead people. Just mentioning her father went into mad scientific that seek power, is preferable.

Now for the dead people, hm... I admit it's always an issue to me, as the rules tend to ban it, but on other hand the show showed that death was canon...
Ocs with mentioned decreased people are already been accepted in the past. So yeah, it's always a bit of a struggle for me xp.

You say your oc take her sister's foal to raise it. But what about her sister's husband ? I mean, you can mention that your oc help the foal's father to raise it. Without specially mentioning what happened to her sister.

It can be write like this, for the example : "Her sister was later married and gave birth, but sadly things didn't goes well for her and their mother. Mistletoe decided to help her sister's husband to raise foal as her own and named her Bellis Perennies after her sister's name Daisy. After that her father shut her out. He spent all day in his lab, experimenting. He went mad and became power-hungry, trying to collect more power for some sinister aims. But once people found out Fossil went missing, probably into hiding."

These corrections done, I think I can validate your oc ^^

[Mistletoe]

Ha I had a feeling I got carried away XD I watch too many dark kids movies, anyways I tried my best to tweak the history, if there's anything else that needs fixing it's no problem for me to change it
Also um if u wanna rp sometime because I'm lonely >. <

[Ashti Sandburst]

Well, the dark itself isn't especially banned ^^. But yeah, I do think it's better to imply it instead of explicit state it. Implying allow to keep the original idea, but in a way that make it more acceptable.

The change are quite fine ^^. there is still this part "but her sister sadly died not soon after, along with her mother." that bug a bit. I have taken the initiative to correct it. Better play it safe.