Trik Port (Temporaly accepted)

[zap4th]

-General Stuff



Name: Trik Port



Nickname/Alias(es): Tel Port, Tela, scrap-brain



Race: unicorn(pegasus parents)



Gender: Male



Age: the pony equivalent of a human at 20



Additional Status: born in cloudsdale, as a unicorn(go to history for more info)



-Physical Stuff-



Pelt Color: dark blue



Mane/Tail Color and Style: mane and tail are both short and semi-messy(sort of like an intentional messy if that makes sense). both are also light blue with red streaks



Eye Color: purple



Cutie Mark: a line/arrow with wings and nether-portal-type particals around that goes from A to B.
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Physique: a bit short but fairly strong for his size.





-Social Stuff-



Current Residence: moving to ponyville



Job: weather control. (wants to join the wonderbolts[IS NOT A COPY OF RAINBOW DASH! HAS THEIR OWN REASONS])



Mother: n/a (anyone can make one just ask me first)



Father: n/a (again, anyone can make one just ask me first)



Sibling(s): n/a (once again, anyone can make one just ask me first)



Closest Friends: will update.



Courting/Courted By: will update



Mate: will update



Foal(s): will update





-Personality Stuff-



Likes: spicy food(will put RAINBOW on stuff), flying, teleporting, racing.



Dislikes: bullies, being told he can't do something, being trapped.



Motivation: Wants to be the first unicorn in the wonderbolts.



Strengths: is excellent at getting somewhere fast, Ok at buillding.



Weaknesses/Flaws: doesn't care for rules if he can't see the reason behind them, a bit of a show off if you inflate his ego enough, short tempered, a little annoying.



Fears: falling, being trapped.



Overall Persona:  Trik Port is a very intelligent unicorn, able to create a steampunk-esqu suit with wings (for gliding) that he could make fold in and fold out (completely mind you) with magic (sort of like how Tank can control his propeller with his mind). While he is smart, he is stubborn, doesn't like to follow people blindly, has a short temper, is a bit awkward when starting a conversation, can't focus very well and is not good at planning. Trik is also fairly strong, but would prefer not to fight ANYONE if he didn't have to. Thanks to his rough past of being a unicorn living in Cloudsdale he is not very patient with bullies, since almost everyone in Cloudsdale made fun of his inability to fly. Trik is especially sensitive to his inability to truly fly, as he has always been fascinated by flying, racing, putting on air shows, and destroying clouds, likely due to the fact that all the pegasi around him, even those that were younger than him, could. He is always looking to complete his masterpiece of a suit with wings that would actually flap and allow him to fly, but he has not yet been able to replicate the magic that allows pegasi to fly with little physical movement of their wings. He always goes to wonderbolt shows, no matter where they are, and will do anything to find a way to impress them, seeking to gain a spot on their team when he finishes his suit.



History or Background (Optional) : Trik was born in cloudsdale, which, as a unicorn, was problematic. he had to get a cloud walking spell put on him every day until he learned to do it himself, however he was not interested in that. he always wanted to fly, and when he went to school this want only increased when he had to sit out during most gym classes. when the class was flying, trik was in either the computer lab, looking at prosthetic wings, or, when he was old enough, in the shop making something he called "project: wonderbolt" one day he finally finished it and went to class with it. when the teacher told him to sit down he smirked and showed him his project: an steampunk-esqu exo-suit with wings that he could use to glide. He put it on and used the wind his classmates were making propel him upward and forward... until he flew past his classmates and through a storm cloud. the suit shorted out, making the wings fold in, and trik started falling. this caused him to panic and... teleport. when he took off his armour he found he had his cutie-mark. he then went on to work on his suit, hoping to eventually find out how to upgrade it with the power of true flight, train and see if he could be the first unicorn member of the wonderbolts.





 

[Ashti Sandburst]

Hmm... firs of all, Hello^^. and thanks for your interest to our site.

Now, I am afraid, Prosthetic wing for non-pegasus isn't allowed. Nothing personal, and on a impartial way you application may be fine, but we already, in the past, refused prosthetic wing and any mean that would allow a non-pegasus pony to fly (like magic or mechanical wings). Save for normal mean of transport like dirigible, airship etc...

Even if it's probable someone invent a suite to allow flying, and the idea is interesting, I am afraid it go in our policy about "alicorn-like oc". The fact to try emulating alicorn (magic + fly ability). In the same way that a Pegasus/earth pony using magic. now, I see your intent isn't to make an alicorn but it wouldn't be right that we accept it for you while we hadn't for some others application.

Allowing such wing would create loophole in our rules.

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Something I can propose you is to have your oc working on such project and aiming to make such suite. maybe managing to create a prototype, but nothing conclusive enough to work or allow to fly. A bit like would be trying creating Blaster gun in our actual time period. ^^

Which means your oc project can be standing that would last for decades of study and test instead of something created when a kid.

[zap4th]

would gliding be ok? if not I don't know what else to do.

[Ashti Sandburst]

Gliding ? Well, I suppose sounds fine ^^. 'fin, if you mean the sport or accessory to do so. Not something like gliding for an infinite ammong of time or at will.

[Ashti Sandburst]

Aahh, better ^^. Thanks for your efforts, it works now.
YOu character is acceptable, However I just need you to bold the entries of your app/and fix the pacing (to make it easier to read). Explain the likes, and dislikes and why he want to be Wonderbolts (in motivation), as well as explaining the fear. Instead of just list them.

I know it's a lot, but the more your application is fleshed out, the better ^^. If you can do that I'll validate your oc.

[zap4th]

I am gonna work on it whenever I have time so I can refine it but if I can use it I am happy for now.

[Ashti Sandburst]

Hmm... well, ok xp. I suppose.
I'll trust you for now. Just don't forget to bring the update afterwards. Because I asked everyone to do so, so I want to make no exception.