Crystal Blossom

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∞Name: Crystal Blossom

∞Nick Name: Crystal

∞Race: Unicorn

∞Gender: Female

∞Age: Filly

∞Additional Status: Crystal has a pet snow fox named Gala and she loves to wear cute little accessorizes in her mane.

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∞Pelt Color: White but she does not have a crystal pelt.

∞Mane/Tail Color and Style: Crystal has a light pink mane with lighter pink highlights in her mane. Her tail is just like her mane, and is is slightly curled at the end.

∞Eye Color: Crystal has light violet eyes.

∞Cutie Mark: N/A

∞Other Scars/Markings: N/A

∞Physique: Crystal Blossom is slim and small

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∞Current Residence: Canterlot

∞Job: N/A

∞Mother: Fleur de Verre

∞Father: Bronze Arrow

∞Siblings: N/A

∞Other Family: N/A

∞Closest Friends: N/A

∞Courting/Courted By: N/A

∞Mate: N/A

∞Foals: N/A

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∞Likes: Crystal Blossom loves modeling, singing, trying any kind of magic spell, and her favorite treat are red velvet cupcakes. Crystal adores princess Cadence and hopes to meet her soon, especially Twilight because she loves magic so much. Another hobby she likes is acting.

∞Dislikes: Crystal Blossom hates being teased, failing at anything, being alone, and she really hates the taste of hay. Crystal also hates people being bullied as she was bullied herself and does not want others to feel the pain she went through.

∞Motivation: Every morning Crystal runs to the Canterlot library to get a book to learn new spells. She also loves singing in her choir and everyday after she eats lunch she goes out to were ponies model and tries to copy their actions. She literally lives for the princesses witch is another reason why she loves to learn magic, so she can meet Celestia and be more like Twilight. Crystal Blossom knows very little about the other princesses but she wants to know as much as she can about them. Crystal loves the princesses, but she really loves magic witch is her biggest reason why she wants to join Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns.  

∞Strengths: Crystal is really good at singing, learning new things, and lending a hoof. She is always around to help, even though she messes things up now and then. Crystal Blossom is also very honest and generous. When she lived in The Crystal Empire she always shared her lunch with her friends if they didn't have enough to eat. Crystal is also very good at magic and that is what she focuses on a lot.

∞Flaws: She does not have a normal crystal pelt like the other ponies from The Crystal Empire where she was born. Crystal also is naive and her cutie mark has not arrived yet. Crystal also lies so ponies think her life is perfect, but she lies mostly because her parents live in The Crystal Empire while she lives alone in Canterlot. Crystal often day dreams too, and she loves to buy loads of accessorizes. Her family is also rich so she can act like a brat or be spoiled sometimes.

∞Overall Persona: Crystal Blossom is a sweet, kind, and understanding pony. She loves modeling dresses and practicing basic magic spells. Because she is a unicorn, she really wants to be in Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. Crystal loves the princesses and really looks up to them. She comes from The Crystal Empire however she does not have a crystal pelt like other ponies from The Crystal Empire so she is afraid she will be bullied in Canterlot because of her flaw. Crystal has many hobbies but she loves magic better than anything. Crystal has had a better life because of magic, whenever she feels sad, lonely, or bored she uses her magic to amuse herself. The reason why Crystal does not have a crystal pelt like most ponies from The Crystal Empire is because she was born when Sombra was still over rule. When Twilight and her friends defeated Sombra the ponies from The Crystal Empire got their crystal pelts back. However Crystal was still frightened over Sombra because she was so young and did not get her crystal pelt because still had Sombra in her memory. Many foals bullied her for not having her crystal pelt and made up stories to frighten her, the foals thought this was funny but it only made Crystal Blossom's fear worse. Even though she does not have a crystal pelt she still acts like a normal pony. However when she manages to concur this fear she will then have a crystal pelt like everyone else. Crystal belies that nothing can stop a ponies destiny.

∞History: Crystal Blossom was born in the beautiful Crystal Empire. For her whole life Crystal has loved magic when she found out about Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns she practiced her magic everyday, she hopes to get into the school and become on of Celestia's personal students. She has always had a big heart and has big dreams too. She has recently moved to Canterlot to see if she will get into the school or not. Crystal was also being bullied in her previous school in The Crystal Empire for not having her cutie mark like everyone else in the class and also for not having a crystal pelt. No matter how bad things get she will never stop following her heart.

[CableZ]

You can only have 1 app at a time, there is a restriction on how many characters you can app at once. You must have gotten to at least 2 full pages in an rp with the previous character before apping a new one. You will need to pick a character you want me to look at before you can app another.

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Thank you for telling me this CableZ I will remember your comment for future reference. I would like you to look at Crystal Blossom if you don't mind, and would you like me to delete Night Star?

[CableZ]

Okay then, lets get started.

So for the most part, the app is great, but there are some issues.
Overall persona needs to be 250 words minimum, its an important app section, arguably the most important.
Another thing I should point out is that Cadance hasn't been the leader of the crystal empire for that long, your character will be very young, almost too young for her to have been looking up to the princesses. Before Sombra was overthrown, she won't have known about the princesses. So you might want to think about that. It ties into the question of exactly what your character wants to do, they're a bit all over, magic, singing. Where does her passion lay and more importantly, why?

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Okay I'll make sure to do that, and the reason why she is that age is because she was born when sombra was still over rule. I also researched things about the crystal empire and apparently the ponies knew that the princesses stopped sombra they just felt as if they were still under his rule because they did not know where the crystal heart was. In the episode with the crystal empire when twilight and her friends started the fest the ponies started to become more happy and started to remember what it was like before sombra ruled the crystal empire. When they remembered more they remembered the crystal heart to and they got there crystal pelts back. When I researched this I thought well what if a pony didn't have a crystal pelt, would that mean that she still felt like sombra ruled over the crystal empire? Well technically yes but I didn't want Crystal to seem like a sad moaning pony so I just said she was still frightened over sombra because she was born before twilight and her friends stopped him for good. Because she was frightened he was still in her memory so she does not have a crystal pelt but she does act like a normal pony, however when she manages to concur this fear she will then have a crystal pelt like everyone else. I hope you will accept this once a make my adjustments.

[CableZ]

I'd have to see where you read all of this from because it just sounds like fanon.

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I have re read my information, and the part about her looking up to the princesses part was correct. She could not have known much about Luna or Celestia, however she can look up to Twilight and Candence because they were both in the empire when the ponies got their memories back. However no that I think about it from some of the other episdoes, their have been sightings of foals in the empire from episodes when they were in the empire. Meaning that they should know about all the princesses. Even during MLP movies like the first one, all the princesses were in the empire so Crystal could know some information about the princesses. In conclusion Crystal could have known about the princesses even if it was very little. However the part when I said that she was frightened and did not have a crystal pelt because she still had Sombra in her memory and was frightened, is not real just a opinion I made for a bit of drama in the RP because it seemed to fit in the story. If there is anything you would like me to not include in my thread or if you have any questions feel free to ask me.

Here are some links for my information:

mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Crystal_Empire
mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Equestria_Games
mlp.wikia.com/wiki/The_Crystal_Empire_-_Part_1
mlp.wikia.com/wiki/The_Crystal_Empire_-_Part_2

You can also search up crystal pony fillies for prof that they can be the age Crystal Blossom is.

[CableZ]

Ok but that doens't cover why she would look up to them since she's been growing up. The events in the crystal empire only happened at maximum, 3 years ago in equestrian time so your character will have only known of the princess for that ammount of time.

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Alright I see your point, I will change it. However I would at least like her to look up to princess Cadence because she is the ruler of The Crystal Empire.

[CableZ]

She can look up to her, never said there was a problem.

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Okay thank you, so is it acceptable now?

[CableZ]

you've still not changed the history to reflect the fact that she couldn't have looked up to the princesses for her whole life.

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Alright I've changed it is it acceptable now, if it is not can you give me a list of what I need to change so I can do it all at once?

[CableZ]

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Thank you so much CableZ I'll make sure to follow all the rules