Blueprint

[Blueprint]

Name: Blueprint
Nickname/Alias(es): None
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Female
Age: Mare
Additional Status: She wears a blue cloak with a hood that covers her flank

-Physical Stuff-

Pelt Color: White
Mane/Tail Color and Style: A lighty wavy short manestyle with a curved tail that slightly curls upward in between her legs. She had mousy brown hair.
Eye Color: Olive 
Cutie Mark: A tape-measure with a pencil beneath
Other Scars/Markings: Black markings on ears, hooves, and wings
Physique: Average, short

-Social Stuff-

Current Residence: Ponyville Residential (recently moved there)
Job: Home Designer (Residential Architect)
Mother: Shimmering Dawn
Father: Bluebolt
Sibling(s): Spotlight
Other Family: None
Friends: Coffea Arabica
Closest Friends: Minnow (Mentor)
Courting/Courted By: None
Mate: None
Foal(s): None

-Personality Stuff-

Likes: Architecture, designing dresses, designing armor, designing buildings, building furniture, woodworking, sewing, plushies, outfits, cloaks, cooking, desserts
Dislikes: History, unnecessary use of magic, loneliness, destruction of buildings, bad weather, vegetables
Motivation: Architecture, her former mentor (Minnow), the thought of having new friends, the thought of having a great new future of being an architect or some other form of designer, new ideas
Strengths: Very creative, excited, playful, interested in many things, can be very silly and fun to be around, a little weird (but in the good way)
Weaknesses/Flaws: Easily shut-down, weak, nervous, shy, frightened easily, incredibly paranoid, sad at times for no reason at all
Fears: Getting hurt, losing friends, appearing stupid, getting sick, acting so weird that ponies stop hanging around her, being the center of attention, being on stage, being caught singing
Overall Persona: Blueprint is a very shy mare. She is constantly running away from other ponies--literally. If someone is walking behind her she panics and feels like they're going to hurt her, so she runs off. This makes living in a well populated town (Ponyville) very difficult. However, when she is comfortable she tends to give lots of secrets away and cling to her new friend like glue. This tends to push her friends away. She fears this, so she tries to push down her feelings and ends up exploding with emotion once she’s run out of patience. She loves everyone she can to death, and she hates to see them go. She is constantly living out of fear, which tends to give her a headache.Blueprint is also and artist. She has been drawing since she was a little filly and learned how to get her hooves around a quill. She draws all the time, but when she grew bored of doodling for fun she started designing plushies and dresses and items, which became real life projects. When she was an older filly, she made a couch with her father and sold it for 400 bits. After that boost of confidence, she went off to an architectural design school in Ponyville, where she lives today and strives to become the best she can be.
However, this confidence leads her into a lot of issues. Blueprint tends to overreact and feel emotions very strongly. When she is angry, she tends to have a baby-fit and actually get so angry that she throws things and stomps around a lot. After she gets out of her angry phase, she usually cries quite a lot after she realizes the damage she did. Blueprint gets upset so easily that sometimes she’ll just get upset for no reason. And, of course, when she has a friend she loves them very much and is devastated when they leave her.

Story So Far: Blueprint met a new friend in the first few days of her move to Ponyville. She met a shop owner, Coffea Arabica, whom she helped repair her shop. After a brief encounter in the park with this friend yet again, she met Thunder Cracker, an excited DJ who was embarrassed for disturbing the peace.

[Nimbus]

Hey
The application is too short, the sections about personality, regarding all things there, should be expanded, make sure to really elaborate, we want to know as much as we can about the character, Especially motivation, one word, unfortunately is not acceptable for that section. For Overall Persona we ask a minimum of two hundred and fifty words

Hope to hear from you soon, if you need any help, pm me or another mod, you can, however look for accepted characters to see what they did to get accepted in terms of context or content

[Blueprint]

Edited:
-Motivation
-Overall Persona

[Nimbus]

thanks for updating this so far, it would still appear some sections haven't been filled in from the application form, and other sections are still looking bare bones, if you could fill these in and Elaborate on:

• Motivation
  
• Strengths
  
• Weaknesses

[Blueprint]

Actually, every section was filled in. However, I elaborated more on
-Motivation
-Strengths
-Weaknesses

[Nimbus]

Thanks for reviewing your app, however in reference to all sections to be completed, refer to this by Oopsie Daisy
, all sections should be accounted for here
-General Stuff-

Name:
Nickname/Alias(es):
Race:
Gender:
Age:
Additional Status:

-Physical Stuff-

Pelt Color:
Mane/Tail Color and Style:
Eye Color:
Cutie Mark:
Other Scars/Markings:
Physique:

-Social Stuff-

Current Residence:
Job:
Mother:
Father:
Sibling(s):
Other Family:
Closest Friends:
Courting/Courted By:
Mate:
Foal(s):

-Personality Stuff-

Likes:
Dislikes:
Motivation:
Strengths:
Weaknesses/Flaws:
Fears:
Overall Persona:
History/Background:

[Blueprint]

Okay, fixed it so that the mate/courted by/foals section says "none" rather than nothing.

I didn't fill in the background/history section because it said it was optional.

[Nimbus]

The other family section is empty still, if you don't have any just say none : ) other than that it is fine

[Blueprint]

Updated.

[Nimbus]

i know this has been a long process, however it says still that other family has been left blank, so if possible just state none or something for the sake of it being completed

[Blueprint]

Oh, I totally missed that. My apologies, thank you for being so patient with me by the way. Fixed.

[Nimbus]

*accepted*