Galaxy Star

[Mango "Margaret" Dolphin]

-General Stuff-

Name: Galaxy Star (last name>)Alias
Nickname/Alias(es): Star, Twinkling Galaxy, Gal, Galaxy, Starry, Star
Race: Unicorn
Gender: Female
Age: Young Adult
Additional Status: Famous in Manehattan, in school, and once in Fillydelphia.

-Physical Stuff-

Pelt Color: Dark Blue
Mane/Tail Color and Style: A regular mane and tail, if what it looks like. Color: Both near navy blue and a dark blue.
Eye Color: Its yellow, like stars or the sun.
Cutie Mark: A waning crescent moon with stars surrounding it.
Other Scars/Markings: A white spot located on her forehead, slightly shaped as a crescent moon, although it is just a marking.
Physique: Slender

-Social Stuff-

Current Residence: Manehattan
Job: An astrologist.
Mother: Silky Space (Pegasus)
Father: Strangled Time (Unicorn)
Sibling(s): Moon-bow, Spacial Fabric
Other Family: Spunky Science(located in Manehattan), Red Moon(located in Fillydelphia)
Closest Friends: None by the moment, but expecting a bunny to be her pet.
Courting/Courted By: Midnight Thunder
Mate: Didn't marry Midnight Thunder yet.
Foal(s): Expecting one when she gets married.

-Personality Stuff-

Likes: Galaxy likes Midnight Thunder and actual midnight, of course. She normally moon bathes and also loves science. She also loves the moon, the stars, 'moon-bows', and Luna. She also loves fun, and sparkling items, but she doesn't like the sparkling in day.
Dislikes: She hates the warmth of the sun and really bright things, unless its from the night sky or Luna's moon. She also hates being under pure pressure, which explains what she does under pure pressure. She also hates being pushed into too much work.
Motivation: Galaxy is devoted to astronomy. She does science a lot and does scientific projects. When she was a filly, as the stars gleamed outside in the middle of the night, she was fascinated by the twinkling stars and gleaming moon.
Strengths: Galaxy is highly clever, but has problems reading. She prefers voice said problems. She also is good at canoeing, but if it's too bright for her, she is unable to do so. Also, she has an average grade on designing, but people says she uses too much blue, black, and/or glitter.
Weaknesses/Flaws: Galaxy Star is diagnosed with Dyslexia. She still can't read well. Under pure pressure, she starts to look wall-eyed and can't think straight. Also, if she gets a bad grade at something, she starts to sweat 'buckets' and freak out. She is also an a klutz at fashion, often adding too much or putting not enough things on clothing, but when she does dresses she uses a lot of blue and black felt or cotton and glitter, but she says she got it from the night, and says its pretty good.
Fears: Day-time rainbows, and getting bad grades on tests. Shes also afraid of daylight, being hurtled towards a black hole, and being banished into the sun.
Overall Persona:
Galaxy Star is a willing science pony who's talent is in astronomy. When she was a little filly, she adored the beautiful night sky.Once, as she woke up crying one night, she noticed the night sky, calming down. She soon devoted herself to the night, whatever that was to her.
When she first got to school, she had trouble reading the words given to her, often making mistakes. She had learned from her teacher she had dyslexia, a disability effecting foals and fillies such as her, making it harder for them to read or write. She never got to fix this problem in her life so she had to be read aloud. If you are wondering how she reads in her life, her cousin Spunky Science is there to help her.
As she grew up, she gotten smarter and more wiser, and learned nearly half of everything to know of astronomy. As she gotten more famous in Manehattan, she once took a little trip to Fillydelphia , to tell ponies there about her career, even meeting her cousin Red Moon.
Since she liked night so much, that became a habit for her, causing her to dislike the day, including the sun and its heat. Day-time rainbows are really bright, also since the sun is out, it adds more brightness, causing her to dislike this highly.


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[ArchiSky]

Thankfully, the title is correct, it is improved, but there are a few things that still need correcting, and please, don't start a new thread with "a newer and even more improved than last time" title, there is a modify function at the top of the thread which allows you to change things that you've done.

"" that doesn't need to be included, it's fairly obvious that it's a pony's name

There's no evidence of video-games, so I hope Portal does not refer to the video game, and may need some explaining if it's not

More dislikes and fears would be appreciated as there aren't really enough for my liking - and applebloom doesn't count.

She also needs more strengths and weaknesses - she's smart, so she can still solve problems, think around situations, is observant etc, but maybe she's also kind of naive or gullible, or has a bit of a temper.

"SPOILER ALERT!
This summary of this pony is pretty long, and I don't know if its qualified. It may not be that long for you, but its kind of long because I want it to make this ponies summary make sense."

^that doesn't need to be included, we expect long bios.

I wouldn't say dyslexia is a disease, so much as a minor disability

"As you may have 'read', she was strangely known somewhere in space. That is not true. I was kinda feeling lazy the time I wrote that.
Continuing on,"

and


"As for fears of ponies like Apple Bloom, I erased that because it would be a confusing AND long story."

also do not need to be included.

[Mango "Margaret" Dolphin]

Thanks! However, this time I don't want to change forums, since its minor details. Please reply once more when I am finished.

EDIT: Also, I knew there was a 'modify' button, I just felt it would be weird adding more data and erasing data on a forum already judged. I think I know i'm whining, but i've been waiting for Galaxy to be accepted so I can get on with the other ponies.