Sun Riser

[Sun Riser]

-General Stuff-

Name: Sun Riser

Nickname/Alias(es): Sunny

Race: Pegasus

Gender: Female

Age: Teenager

Additional Status: None

-Physical Stuff-

Pelt Color: Bight Orange

Mane/Tail Color and Style: Red Stripes, With Orange stripes in between. Big fluffy tail.

Eye Color: Red

Cutie Mark: A Sun (A circle with two "arrows" one pointing left and one pointing right, two pointing up, one smaller one in the middle of them,
same for bottom except flipped)


Other Scars/Markings: Left wing slightly bent after a bad landing
Physique: Skinny

-Social Stuff-

Current Residence: Cloudsdale

Job: The Rainbow Factory

Mother: Hoof Clippe

Father: Techno Mousse

Sibling(s): Cookie Crunchie; younger brother

Other Family: None

Closest Friends: Candy Gumdrop, Lucky Traveler, Stormy Flee

Courting/Courted By: None

Mate: None

Foal(s): None

-Personality Stuff-

Likes: Sun Riser absolutely loves daytime and daylight, she just loves the beauty of nature. Especially when the sun shines it's light on it. She loves they beauty and power of the sun. Sun Riser had always loved peace and quiet, she tend to keep to herself and doesn't usually have many friends. She thinks that books are a portal to another world, she would usually be seen with a book. She loves to draw, any manner of art, she would love.

Dislikes: Sun Riser had never liked arguments, or any kind of conflict, if one comes up, she will try to stop it. She is very prone to failure, and very much dislikes failure in herself and others. 

Motivation: Sun Riser has a great goal that she is currently trying to work up to, she wants to help everypony in Equestria. She wants to make everyone happy in a big way.

Strengths: Sun Riser is very passionate when it comes to helping others, she is very helpful. She loves to help others, if she sees anypony that need help, she will be there. 

Weaknesses/Flaws: Sun Riser has a very quick and fiery temper, it usually gets her in trouble. Because she hates failure, and is prone to it, she gets very angry at herself very quickly. Even though she loves to help,if anypony is in pain or trips in any manner, she will laugh. She never causes or tries to cause, any accidents. She has a tendency to be very forgetful, some find this useful.

Fears: Sun Riser has a very deep fear of eclipses, since they block out the light of the sun. She also has a lerge fear of talking in front of big audiences.

Personality: Sun Riser is very friendly, she will be friends with anyone that can put up with her. She can also be quite shy, mostly to people she doesn't know, and she has quite a dose of stage fright. She will investigate anything that catches her eye, no matter what it is. Sun Riser thinks in the best way she can, if somethings gone bad, she will think of the best possible thing. She sees her world as a mass of colors, ready to be put into art. Her mind is usually cluttered with ideas for little doodles or memories. 

History/Background: N/A


Read more: friendshipismagicrpg.proboards.com/thread/226/creating-character-post-app#ixzz2edXt5CjH 

[CableZ]

Few things need adding before this can be accepted.
The personality section needs to be 6 lines long, likes, dislikes, motivation, strengths, weaknesses and fears need to be added and improved upon, having things like war and Apocalypse in likes and fears doesn't fit the tone of MLP. The whole app doesn't need to be bolt, just the headings.
We'd rather you not mention another character in your app, you don't need to say the mane is like dash's. The mother isn't so much optional as you either put N/A or a name. Also, side note, why would she fear princess luna, the whole nightmare moon thing was sorted.

Fix all of these issues and you're good to go, thanks.

[Sun Riser]

I understand. Thank You.

[CableZ]

sorry I should ahve been more clear, by headings, I meant each heading. as in Name: Race: etc etc
other than that the app is now fine.

[Sun Riser]

Ok, thank you . I perceive that I had fixed it.

[CableZ]

Yep, looks fine